http://randomgirl666.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] randomgirl666.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] moffaterawho 2012-03-28 08:25 pm (UTC)

Okay, badly phrased. Not so much cheaply edited, as weirdly edited. Why use that shouty guy at the beginning when you can't even tell what he's saying. "Freeze me?" "Release me?" "Frisk me?" "Fist me?"

Also about two thirds of the way through, Amy gets cut off mid-sentence, when they could have just cut right after the Doctor stops speaking.

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